Incest ✨꧁ ⪻ எனக்கு கண்ணு தெரியாது ⪼ ꧂✨
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(29-06-2020, 12:02 AM)Joshua Wrote: Story full of non logical situation and way of narration...it's not a good impression in your story am expecting alot.but it's fully spoiled your milk form update...she speak double meaning but nothing will happen or she's innocent?

Bro thank you for your opinion ....maybe you are right.. because I am not a professional writer... this is my first story ever written.
I try to improve...in my upcoming part...if you still think it's not worth....I won't write anymore...
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RE: எனக்கு கண்ணு தெரியாது - by king of x - 29-06-2020, 03:41 AM
RE: -EKT- - by king of x - 04-10-2023, 05:10 AM
RE: -EKT- - by vivekbabu839 - 19-10-2023, 11:39 PM
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RE: -EKT- - by king of x - 20-10-2023, 09:56 AM
RE: -EKT- - by vivekbabu839 - 20-10-2023, 11:40 AM
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RE: -EKT- - by king of x - 21-10-2023, 10:08 PM
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RE: -EKT- - by Jeyjay - 31-10-2023, 03:53 PM
RE: -EKT- - by king of x - 03-11-2023, 06:38 AM
RE: -EKT- - by manigopal - 03-11-2023, 04:32 PM
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RE: -EKT- - by vivekbabu839 - 03-11-2023, 05:51 PM
RE: -EKT- - by king of x - 06-11-2023, 12:46 PM
RE: -EKT- - by king of x - 06-11-2023, 12:48 PM
RE: -EKT- - by Sparo - 04-11-2023, 01:26 AM
RE: -EKT- - by king of x - 06-11-2023, 12:48 PM
RE: -EKT- - by omprakash_71 - 04-11-2023, 06:30 AM
RE: -EKT- - by king of x - 06-11-2023, 12:49 PM
RE: -EKT- - by manigopal - 04-11-2023, 07:40 AM
RE: -EKT- - by king of x - 06-11-2023, 12:47 PM
RE: -EKT- - by manigopal - 06-11-2023, 01:26 PM
RE: -EKT- - by Jeyjay - 05-11-2023, 06:56 AM
RE: -EKT- - by king of x - 06-11-2023, 12:47 PM
RE: -EKT- - by whisky - 06-11-2023, 08:07 AM
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RE: -EKT- - by omprakash_71 - 07-11-2023, 04:31 AM
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RE: -EKT- - by Sparo - 08-11-2023, 01:32 AM
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RE: -EKT- - by whisky - 09-11-2023, 05:13 AM
RE: -EKT- - by omprakash_71 - 09-11-2023, 06:32 AM
RE: -EKT- - by king of x - 10-11-2023, 09:46 PM
RE: -EKT- - by king of x - 10-11-2023, 09:50 PM
RE: -EKT- - by king of x - 10-11-2023, 09:51 PM
RE: -EKT- - by Sparo - 11-11-2023, 01:15 AM
RE: -EKT- - by king of x - 11-11-2023, 08:26 AM
RE: -EKT- - by king of x - 11-11-2023, 08:27 AM
RE: -EKT- - by king of x - 11-11-2023, 08:27 AM
RE: -EKT- - by Kalifa - 11-11-2023, 01:37 PM
RE: -EKT- - by king of x - 12-11-2023, 08:48 PM
RE: -EKT- - by Kalifa - 13-11-2023, 05:30 AM
RE: -EKT- - by omprakash_71 - 11-11-2023, 09:16 PM
RE: -EKT- - by king of x - 12-11-2023, 08:47 PM
RE: -EKT- - by Sparo - 12-11-2023, 12:48 AM
RE: -EKT- - by king of x - 12-11-2023, 08:48 PM
RE: -EKT- - by Jeyjay - 12-11-2023, 02:50 PM
RE: -EKT- - by king of x - 12-11-2023, 08:47 PM
RE: -EKT- - by king of x - 12-11-2023, 08:46 PM
RE: -EKT- - by king of x - 12-11-2023, 08:49 PM
RE: -EKT- - by Kalifa - 12-11-2023, 09:50 PM
RE: -EKT- - by king of x - 12-11-2023, 09:51 PM
RE: -EKT- - by king of x - 12-11-2023, 09:52 PM
RE: -EKT- - by Kalifa - 13-11-2023, 05:29 AM
RE: -EKT- - by omprakash_71 - 13-11-2023, 11:46 AM
RE: -EKT- - by Jeyjay - 13-11-2023, 08:52 PM



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