23-06-2020, 08:49 PM
(19-06-2020, 10:15 PM)Fun_Lover_007 Wrote: Me too felt the same. The story is moving very fast. Really the twist is unexpected. Especially about lal's wife and her FIL.
twist is unexpected i too accept.. but you (writer) are entirely differ frm other writers so continue in ur style dont take forward as other writers. sorry if i said any thing wrong. its my suggestion