A wedding ceremony in village

[Logan555]

Logan bhai, your imagination along with the character's description with mindset is amazing.
Hats off to your story. The way you have described each and every character's mindset and their feelings with the comparison with conscience and lust is awesome. The duel between mind and body of everyone is outstanding.
And making Vikram a hero and taking out Shabana is such a beauty in the story.

Waiting for many more.
Thanks

Thanks bro after a long time u comment.
Thanks bro mai unke mindset ko shayad isliye describe kar pata hu kyuki khud ko us situation me feel karke wo update likhta hu.
Kyuki ye ek fact hai ki ye zaroori nahi jo baat hum dil se sochte ho wahi dimag se bhi soche. Hum khud apni rojmarra ki zindagi me kai baar dil dimag ka ye duel face karte hai jisme kabhi humara dil jeetta hai par most of the times jeet dimag ki hoti hai. Yahi duel mai yaha dikhane ki koshish karta hu. Koshish karta hu ki kisi bhi character ko rundi ki tarah pesh na karo unki har feeling ko kisi reason ke sath pesh karu.
Vikram aaj samaj ke us varg ko present karta hai jise hum Grey sheded kehte hai jo na puri tarah white yani achha hai aur na puri tarah black yani bura hai. Sometimes apko wo sahi lagega aur sometimes galat. Thats why he is exceptional.

Agle update jald doonga.
Thanks again for the feedback.