19-06-2020, 07:35 PM
(This post was last modified: 19-06-2020, 07:47 PM by Desmond Miles. Edited 1 time in total. Edited 1 time in total.)
(Kavya raises her eyes as soon as she hears the lock sound. She runs into her bedroom and locks the door. Carefully she pulls a table and places it under the bathroom ventilator. She climbs the table and places her eye in the corner of the ventilator. Her eyes widen as she hears the sounds of piss hitting the commode. She moves her eyes around the ventilator and finally catches a glimpse of Kushal’s penis. She licks her lips and Kushal finishes peeing. She keeps turning away feeling guilt but returns her glance enjoying the view. She gets the down the table and sits back in sofa before Kushal comes back.)
Hated these lines on the first page.. I mean, she was horny for Manoj's love.. but why the hell would she do something like this on the start at all??.. this is something the readers hate when they are reading a slow transformation themed story.. please understand..
Hated these lines on the first page.. I mean, she was horny for Manoj's love.. but why the hell would she do something like this on the start at all??.. this is something the readers hate when they are reading a slow transformation themed story.. please understand..