18-06-2020, 04:46 AM
Not sure which direction is this story headed at..
Instead of feeling erotic, it makes us feel sympathetic for Saniya..
This is a huge turn off for readers.. we would need to see an erotic side of a housewife and not someone who would give it up for the sake of her child or poverty..
Instead of feeling erotic, it makes us feel sympathetic for Saniya..
This is a huge turn off for readers.. we would need to see an erotic side of a housewife and not someone who would give it up for the sake of her child or poverty..