Adultery Shy housewife and secret cross dresser hubby

[Antar]

Though the narration is fine, this story lacks the element of ‘conflict’. The sissy, the bitchy wife, the bull and now the boss – all are on the same page.

Compare this with Manu’s narration in THE UNWANTED HOUSEGUEST - There Manu had to grapple with Prem’s domination, wife’s machination, his ambivalence regarding his own orientation and finally to determine what he wanted and what he was willing to sacrifice etc.


Without any conflict, what you write now will be more of the same thing. It will be very challenging to keep the story as being ‘interesting’. Good luck with that!