11-06-2020, 11:25 PM
(11-06-2020, 02:25 AM)doctor101 Wrote: Logan bhai, aap ki story ka climax itnaa suspense se bharaa huaa romaanchak hai ki kyaa Vikram Shabana - Laalu ko dhhond paayegaa? Kya Vikram Shabana ko bhediyon se bachayega yaa kgud gangbang men shaamil ho jaayegaa? Kya Vikram ek hero savior ke roop men uska character transformation hoga? Aur humaari Neha ki raat ka lucky partner kaun banega ? Vikram ya Kalloo? Waiting and can't resist the upcoming updates eagerly. Brilliant work Logaan bhai. Tusi great ho?
Thanks doctor bro, itni badi story me agar ant tak suspense bana rahe to story me readers ka interest bhi bana rehta hai warna story bus sex scenes ki repeatation matra ban kar reh jati hai. Philhaal is update me Vikram ne ek hero ka rasta chuna aur khud ko tronsform karte hue khud ko Neha se alag kar liya. Par kya Neha itni jaldi apni ye bezzati bardasht kar legi aur jab Shobha aur Vikram dono ko ek doosre ki sachhai pata chalegi to unka ye pyar barkarar reh paega ye ab bhi ek sawaal hai.
And ofcourse Neha to Neha hai wo to har raat me kuchh naya lekar aati hai kabhi BSM bride cum kutiya ban jati hai to kabhi ek aisa update deti hai ki story hi ban karwa deti hai to kabhi nadi ke andar ghus kar sex karti hai. Uski fantasys ka koi ant hi nahi ab aaj raat wo kya fanatasy karegi.
A Wedding Ceremony in Village
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