08-06-2020, 11:04 AM
Waah! Superb bro, what a nice and thrilling but suspense-less update. But, I liked it very much. I think last 2 paragraphs should be with the next update to finish and this update should have some twist at the end to get suspense for next update. It's just my thought, no other things. This is also one type of ending for the update. As I said earlier, I'm always support you when ever you post the story and I'm always with you. I know you don't like wishes, but anyways congrats for completing 1st love story.
Eagerly waiting for your next update of next love story.
Eagerly waiting for your next update of next love story.
Respect everyone 
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My first story: ప్రేమ+పగ=జీవితం
. Give respect to writers in this site. Give a best complement to get more updates from them, and don't insult them. My first story: ప్రేమ+పగ=జీవితం
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