06-06-2020, 01:13 PM
(This post was last modified: 06-06-2020, 01:20 PM by ambirod. Edited 1 time in total. Edited 1 time in total.)
Very nice story... especially when reading from a woman's point of view... Just one thing to mention- She seems very easy to get. The Tailor got her very easily though. Baban and others had to struggle and that added more interest to read. I suggest, you keep you natural flow of writing alive. It is well written already and let that natural flow continue. We all will suggest what we want to fantasize about and then the story may lose it's original flavor. Please continue writing in your own style... it is exciting to get surprised by your kinks... Thank you for the story.