Adultery யசோ, என் மனைவி (Completed)
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(04-06-2020, 04:40 PM)game40it Wrote: I understand that you are just doing a translation of this story so I am just telling my view of it. I feel this story was written by the original author solely for the purpose of titillating the readers so in that aspect it is alright. It does however, stretch the believability aspect a bit too much. It is understandable that a woman who had decided to explore her sexuality, albeit with the consent and support of her husband, would decide to do so with a person who she is attracted too. That she would become so promiscuous as to have sex indiscriminately, a complete change to her character before does seem a stretch. Again she seems to have no fear of contracting anything or passing it on to her husband in having unprotected sex with men who she hardly knows. That a husband, no matter how supportive, would not be alarmed by it is strange. The husband seems quite detached to his wife's activities so much so he really doesn't seem to care. Of course most sex stories are not logical as it's sole purpose is to thrill. I guess what I'm trying to say is that even taking the nature of sex stories and it's intended audience into consideration the stories which have a greater semblance to reality have greater pull on the readers. This story had that possibility but going forward it seemed to have squandered that. This is no criticism of you as the author because you are not responsible for the story and have taken the trouble translate it for the benefit of the readers.
Thanks for your valuable as well as detailed comments. These kind of comments really encouraging. 

One of the main reason I like the story and translate it, even though yaso becomes slutty, involves in adultery, BBC interracial, public exhibitionism, BDSM kind of activities she remained loyal to her husband, never humiliates him, always maintained her love to her hubby. 

Now in Tamil, we have more adultery, cuckold stories but so much of degradation, humiliation for hubby character. This one don't have any humiliating scenes for him.
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RE: யசோ, என் மனைவி - by nathan19 - 04-06-2020, 07:55 PM



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