02-06-2020, 07:48 PM
We are reading and enjoying the story. few of our friends studying your writing style., most of us playing vital role in your story.,
My Friend's Wife......
she is reason for the story., and the essence of the story., and the motto of this story.,
and we need to wait for every character to help in enjoying the girl and ecstasy is the limit.,
enjoying is not a word but ecstasy is the ultimate..and there is no limit.,
every experience with Monika will be memorable segment.
But the story has to be depicted without missing and losing the face.
in between karan has to bring other characters into complete bliss. and same time he should not lost the interest in Monika.
Two shades of sword.,
I think Desi bhai struggling for perfect line.
My Friend's Wife......
she is reason for the story., and the essence of the story., and the motto of this story.,
and we need to wait for every character to help in enjoying the girl and ecstasy is the limit.,
enjoying is not a word but ecstasy is the ultimate..and there is no limit.,
every experience with Monika will be memorable segment.
But the story has to be depicted without missing and losing the face.
in between karan has to bring other characters into complete bliss. and same time he should not lost the interest in Monika.
Two shades of sword.,
I think Desi bhai struggling for perfect line.