[Sana Shah]

Omprakashji,

Please take the story as per your own storyline, whatever you had in mind on how the story should proceed.... no point in listening to people who first criticize and then come with requests......


Your story is developing very nicely.... Amazing writing..... clp); clp); clp);

Hello Chamchey type person...maine koi kisi ko request nahi ki...or na tumhain kisi ne beech me broker banne ka kaha hai ...so mind your own business or apne comment par hi focus karo to behtar hoga tumhare lye