28-05-2020, 02:19 PM
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(27-05-2020, 05:31 PM)Givemeextra Wrote: excellent story
(27-05-2020, 08:44 PM)blackdesk Wrote: good plot but story finished in hurry. It could be one of the best story
(28-05-2020, 08:12 AM)Raj28 Wrote: Super
Thanks for commenting. What do u think? Will ppl be interested to read follow up stories on Menal describing her time at the brothel?
I also tried adding some pics to suit the story. Wat do u think?