[jtiwary]

Jo maine suggestions diye regarding story...usey include karo story me....and sorry agr meri baat buri lagi ho to

Omprakashji,

Please take the story as per your own storyline, whatever you had in mind on how the story should proceed.... no point in listening to people who first criticize and then come with requests......


Your story is developing very nicely.... Amazing writing..... clp); clp); clp);