27-05-2020, 09:21 PM
(27-05-2020, 08:12 PM)perfectmohib Wrote: His narration as a past story is not so cool because being a small kid he can't remember so much and also he is behaving like a spy and so.
It's a hot erotic story so let it be kinda LIVE, don't let the kid narrate.
Also don't add that criminal in the story as this lady is not a slut. Instead add champas father in law to fuck both.
Also both oldies fuck this milf together.
And make big updates so to make it more erotic.
This is all my view
Good Question. agar story ka maza lena hai to her ek cheez ko detail me likhna ho ga. Chahe ek chota bacha hi es cheez ko dekh raha hai. Lekin hamain usko avoid ker k naration ka maza lena ho ga.
Aglay update ka intazar rahay ga


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