Misc. Erotica CHAMPA - EK AURAT YA KHILAUNA

[sam_rozer]

Loved the update but hated that nivedita has to die........
Felt like an update is missing here as there is no information about suchi backlash and some missing points are there dear bhukhaland please look into it whether there is an update missing or its just my misunderstanding..
the update is so well written down to emotions of everyone but missed reaction of manu and suchi when he got the information about nivedita except that all was well written. and i dont remember what was a betrayal to baba regarding ujjawal disease what nivedita promised which she couldn't give. nivedita was one of my most favorite character in this saga who has loved manu in an unselfish way and always wanted good for him. She loved everyone even mansi knowing she is urmila's, daughter. I can't write enough about her. you gave a nice farewell to her.
it was nice to see manu not taking any names instead of nivedita as it shows maturity of him...