19-05-2020, 06:39 AM
Bro..Such a nice story you've written..
1. Yenna dha sakthi ku avan amma mela kovam irundhalum avala kanum nu romba feel panra idam.
2. Than thappanavan ah irundhaum adhu than Akka va affect panna kodadhu nu suresh think panradhu.
3. Feelings ah control pnnama nama ishtathuku pona suresh amma mari bitch agi last ah mandayaya poda vendiyadhu dha.
Indha plot lam awesome bro..
last ah extra martial affair sari nu solla vala but everything should be in a limit..ilana nama dha last ah kashta padanum..
1. Yenna dha sakthi ku avan amma mela kovam irundhalum avala kanum nu romba feel panra idam.
2. Than thappanavan ah irundhaum adhu than Akka va affect panna kodadhu nu suresh think panradhu.
3. Feelings ah control pnnama nama ishtathuku pona suresh amma mari bitch agi last ah mandayaya poda vendiyadhu dha.
Indha plot lam awesome bro..
last ah extra martial affair sari nu solla vala but everything should be in a limit..ilana nama dha last ah kashta padanum..