A Banana Muffin Saga

[themaskeditor]

Thank you for your feedback. I have always tried to cut short the lengthy descriptions of the thought-waves of all these characters. Mostly due to the fact that, an average human cannot keep one's attention/focused on anything more than 12-15 seconds before one's brain registers at least one distraction (or more). Plus given the fact that, reading itself being a tedious activity during these times, it requires super-human effort to complete couple of paragraphs...And, it is at such juncture where this story is getting posted with such long narrations. 

Shall continue the efforts to cut this short...

Thanks for the reply. 

In my comment I did not mean anything with your writing quality. All I meant that I shall read it in my leisure time. 

Your story is not just a read and go thing, your words, dialogues and acts gets registered in our minds. Hence more then reading I prefer to delve in it. Besides this story liberally relays human emotion and feelings though sexual in nature has a connect with me.

I love long narration and slow developing story.

It is your writing skills and thought process that has attracted me and many others to your story. Please do not change it. 

Thanks for your efforts and love you to continue this work of art.