13-05-2020, 11:31 PM
(13-05-2020, 01:10 AM)doctor101 Wrote: Logaan bhai, erotic scene ko kaise long buit up karen. Woh aapse sikhen. Lakhan aur Vinitaa ke characters bahot hi unique hai. Aur aapne jo sex narrations ke variations bshot hi interesting, kaamuk aur dilchasp hai. Keep it up Logaan bhai.
(13-05-2020, 01:05 AM)doctor101 Wrote: Logan bhai, bahot bahot shukriya. Aap ka creative hard work hum jaise naye writers ko inspire karten hain. Lekin aap ka hard work appreciate karten hain. Jo passion, commitment, dedication, hard work, creative plots, seductive erotic writing aur aapka subject ka research kaabil-e-taarif hai. Aap ki writing bahot hee professional hai, without any mistakes. Keep it up bro.
Hope you will get spare time in few days to read my update part - 3 and part 4. Part 3 is very very long. Thanks bhai.
Bhai agar situation me khud ko feel karke likha jaega to emotions aur shabd apne aap nikalte chale aate hai. Mai jab koi scene likhta hu to pehle ye feel karta hua ki agar mai khud is scene me hu to kya ho isse scene khud ba khud realistic ban jata hai khaskar vineeta lakhan ke case me. Baaki us par ki gai research in charectars ko aur bhi unique bana deti hai umeed nahi thi ye dono readers ko itna pasand aanege.