A Banana Muffin Saga

[YLTS]

Thanks a lot for the update, will read it shortly.

Thank you for your feedback. I have always tried to cut short the lengthy descriptions of the thought-waves of all these characters. Mostly due to the fact that, an average human cannot keep one's attention/focused on anything more than 12-15 seconds before one's brain registers at least one distraction (or more). Plus given the fact that, reading itself being a tedious activity during these times, it requires super-human effort to complete couple of paragraphs...And, it is at such juncture where this story is getting posted with such long narrations. 

Shall continue the efforts to cut this short...