13-05-2020, 09:54 PM
(13-05-2020, 09:30 PM)veenaimo Wrote: I see lot of people commenting that there are lot men which is not good for story, but they dont understand the genre of each stories... hear Kavi is a slut and she likes to cuck her husband, so i think introducing many will have more scope for longer story... continue your good work..
Not worried about a lot of men -- but it is all around which is getting confused. if the story finishes one line and starts another then it would be good. It is too many at one time