28-11-2018, 09:32 PM
(28-11-2018, 09:13 PM)hfmwife Wrote: Thank you very much for starting this story.This story has a great potential to become one of the greatest stories in adultery domain.Brother I have a suggestion for this story.If you think it will not hurt you and good for this story,please consider this.My suggestion is:Make Karan to convince Disha to appoint the Bhikari as a house servant as he considers that it will be very safe for him to have an old man in his house as he has to tour different cities and sometimes abroad.And make the Bhikari to seduce Disha slowly to make her to fall his trap.Wish best luck of you.
Thank alot ... I really appreciate your Suggestions....
Mere mind mai mai thoda different plot hai bro isliye usko servant nhi bana skta... Aap saath bane rahiye aapko story jaroor pasand aayengi...