13-05-2020, 02:49 PM
(13-05-2020, 02:21 PM)pylode Wrote: Waah milflover kya zabardast likhte ho yaar! Lajawaab! Kya style hai aap ka describe karne ka.... : "Deepa ne apni choot se 2 bachhe nikal diye". Bhai, ek dam mast! Padh ke hum donon ko garma ke rakh diya!
Isi tarah likhte rahiye, dost! Shuru mein thasalli se background aur dialogues likhna, matlab seedha hi chudai scenes par mat pahunch jaana. Aap ke saare readers is kahani ko khoob lamba dekhna chah rahe hain.
Luv u!
pylode
Thank you very much bhai...meri pheli story Hai or ye ek sachi kahani hai....to jo jo abhi tk deepa or harsh k beech hua hai utna he likhunga or jaise jaise dono k beech aage hota jayega wo bhi....bss ye pyaar banae rakhna