Misc. Erotica The First Job- 'Story Of Seduction and Lust'
(09-05-2020, 07:03 PM)themaskeditor Wrote: repped you bro, Very finely written story. With well defined characters in different shade. Also the love track with Nazia brings in the emotional content making it interesting. And Priyanka  bhabi never stops to amaze us. I liked the character of Suneel and somewhere long back in my mind I had thought that Suneel may be knowing this.

Each update gets interesting then the previous one and it keeps loyal readers like us glued to this story.

Thanks a lot for your efforts and keep it up.

(10-05-2020, 04:22 PM)themaskeditor Wrote: I liked almost all the episodes / acts of Priyanka Bhabhi all seemed unique.

Secondly I loved the character of Tanya. Tanya being young and adventurous

Where as Kiran liked the extremes of humiliation loved her role as well.

Nazia seems soft to drive the emotional content and it suits her.  

Initially I thought that the role of Saxena though necessary but was mis-used, he could have been accommodated, but it turned out to be well thought of from the Author after Suneel entered the parking lot.

Thanks a lot for your efforts and keep it up for many more hot episodes to come by.

Thanks for writing such a elaborate review on story. Its very encouraging. Thanks a lot for love and support.
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RE: The First Job- 'Story Of Seduction and Lust' - by playboy131 - 01-12-2019, 10:32 PM
RE: The First Job- 'Story Of Seduction and Lust' - by playboy131 - 06-12-2019, 10:35 PM
RE: The First Job- 'Story Of Seduction and Lust' - by manas - 07-12-2019, 11:24 AM
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