11-05-2020, 10:46 PM
(This post was last modified: 12-05-2020, 09:36 AM by Acchu. Edited 2 times in total. Edited 2 times in total.)
I am a silent reader in this platform .But u r story& narration made me to write this
I read the half of the story in Telugu few days back then I made desperate search for the original story(eager to know what happened)in Tamil section though I don't know tamil.But I found this here in English.
I loved your narration and emotional conflict you have put in to the characters.There are some places you went fastly I feel eg:Meera and Dr Arul conversation,Meera and Saravanan conversation when Meera know the truth and climax bang(Just I felt )
Though the story in Saravanan p.o.view I feel he is not much opened up(May be his character is like that stoic and bore all the pain within himself).I expected he could open up to Meera or at least to Gomati for the kind of concern she has shown to him so that he can bit free from the mental agony he faced.Meera felt pain of her husband and u made good balance and lastly Gomti ShowStealer in climax
Thank you so much for writing the story expecting more from you in future
I read the half of the story in Telugu few days back then I made desperate search for the original story(eager to know what happened)in Tamil section though I don't know tamil.But I found this here in English.
I loved your narration and emotional conflict you have put in to the characters.There are some places you went fastly I feel eg:Meera and Dr Arul conversation,Meera and Saravanan conversation when Meera know the truth and climax bang(Just I felt )
Though the story in Saravanan p.o.view I feel he is not much opened up(May be his character is like that stoic and bore all the pain within himself).I expected he could open up to Meera or at least to Gomati for the kind of concern she has shown to him so that he can bit free from the mental agony he faced.Meera felt pain of her husband and u made good balance and lastly Gomti ShowStealer in climax
Thank you so much for writing the story expecting more from you in future