11-05-2020, 09:15 PM
Quote:sarfarazdgreat
Very nice start riya jee.aap likhti raho,aapne jo plot chuna hai na aage chalkar logon ko bahut pasand aayegi ye story.aur han, aap jakir aur rekha k baare me avi bahut jyada details mat likho.aap jakir aur rekha ki beti wale part ko aage badha kar story ko likho.any once again congrats for ur new assignment....but keep updates on regular basis.agar meri baat buri lagi ho to m xtreemly sorry yar...