09-05-2020, 10:58 PM
(09-05-2020, 10:43 PM)doctor101 Wrote: Playboy bhai, aapke haath men story ki lagaam hai. Aur sach men aap ki story ka content aur characters bahot dilchasp hai. Aap ki Revsti ka character bahot hee natural hai. As a teensger and medical student, naturally she has a right to romance and explore her sexuality. But her has strong vulnerability and over sensitivity. Which she will overcome with experience. Go ahead and write what you want. In Xossipy, readers come for sexual pleasure only. All other readers must read only Non-erotica section only. Or Mills & Boons stories. Loved your story. And more focus on Dr. Revathi. I liked Rudra's education focus and his humanity touch.
thnx bro for support keep liking reading nd commenting on story..