09-05-2020, 10:43 PM
(09-05-2020, 09:59 PM)playboy131 Wrote: I appreciate your critical analysis of the story so far but assuming the lead characters as a randi or chutiya and blaming a girl kyuki vo kisi ki baato me aa gayi is something too judgemental given the phase of the story. However I would like if u read the story till the end nd after that whatever your critical analysis says you can tell me. And about the genre thing i guess adultry is for wife cheating with husband, incest is for family sex, fantasy is for dream sex, erotica for erotic sex so after having no options left thus I chose romace as a genre for this story. Once again thanx nd keep reading and don't mind the genre cause people come here for reading sex story.Playboy bhai, aapke haath men story ki lagaam hai. Aur sach men aap ki story ka content aur characters bahot dilchasp hai. Aap ki Revsti ka character bahot hee natural hai. As a teensger and medical student, naturally she has a right to romance and explore her sexuality. But her has strong vulnerability and over sensitivity. Which she will overcome with experience. Go ahead and write what you want. In Xossipy, readers come for sexual pleasure only. All other readers must read only Non-erotica section only. Or Mills & Boons stories. Loved your story. And more focus on Dr. Revathi. I liked Rudra's education focus and his humanity touch.