06-05-2020, 05:07 PM
(06-05-2020, 03:38 PM)mindset00007 Wrote: I am in two mind. whether to cut short the erotic scene and take story a head or will spend more time with erotic explanation and slowly take story forward. would like to know from readers point of view. Please don't hold your emotions. You are welcome to open your mind on likes and dislikes about the story. I would take your advise as learning experience.
I am in favour of "cut short of erotic scene".