My mom, me and our journey through the years

[Cum blaster]

Although the concenpt is entirely upto writer, but too much humiliation will not be good as per my thinking. Too  much humiliation from male side shows how male only try to think females as sex toys only, which is not good. Some amount of abusing/humiliation is ok, but treating and faming a decent lady as slut, that too in internet, is not a good perspective. However, if the lady dont object, than its ok.
So, if I may suggest, keep the humiliaton low, erotism higher.

Ur suggestions are well taken bro...will try to keep it that way.

But then, how a female is treated by a male depends on how mature the male is.. she has till now been fantasised by young boys of 13-14 years who tend to treat women like an object... You will discover as the story progresses how she is handled in a  completely different way by other males