26-04-2020, 06:19 AM
(This post was last modified: 26-04-2020, 06:44 AM by Prsntvjy0922. Edited 1 time in total. Edited 1 time in total.)
Your writing style is better than ocean. But you have to take this story atleast 150 pages and climax should be on 125th page. Good work and keep it up look like ocean.