23-04-2020, 03:51 PM
(21-04-2020, 09:04 PM)naked_passion Wrote: wonderfull story with awesome happy ending..kudos to you!
(22-04-2020, 01:31 PM)King Kesavan Wrote: Excellent Finish
Gomathi is the real shower stealer.
She proved what a woman is capable of.
Very clever action of using Meera to get her work done.
After hearing about the affair in detail from her husband, she gave the same pain to Meera and Prabu.
Perfect Revenge
Saravanan did not hurt anyone and infact he did good to prabu family in the original and in the sequel.
Very much impressed with the way you finished. Hats off to your writing.
Thanks for your efforts for the story.
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(22-04-2020, 01:59 PM)rombyzomby Wrote: Sex narration between Gomathi and Saravanan would have been cherry over already applied icing on the cake.
Excellent erotic narration with emotional quotient is key to your writing style.
Eagerly waiting for new story
