23-04-2020, 03:48 PM
(21-04-2020, 09:04 PM)naked_passion Wrote: wonderfull story with awesome happy ending..kudos to you!
(21-04-2020, 10:15 PM)saleem8026 Wrote: Wonderful.extrordinary.marvelous story
(21-04-2020, 11:05 PM)gana1234 Wrote: Really you are a story writer Mr. Game40it.
(21-04-2020, 11:24 PM)kamdev99008 Wrote:
great ending of a great saga
i am totally impressed with your story-line except some unreal fantassy
----- impotency of prabhu
----- prabhu's realisation of his mistakes.............contrary to the real character of prabhu
let it go
finally
i'm waiting for your next tale.........................
(22-04-2020, 12:47 AM)Penetration Wrote: Great story.
Really you are an excellent story writer
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