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23-04-2020, 07:28 AM

(22-04-2020, 08:44 PM)seansean007 Wrote: Good,but try to build up the narrative.It seems you are in a hurry.Anyway writing a story takes time so even trying it is a big deal.It was just a suggestion to improve.Keep it up.

Thanks bro , will sure make this better

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Pari : Journey of the queen slut wife - by Maathan - 31-12-2019, 07:15 AM

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RE: Pari : Journey of the queen slut wife - by Maathan - 01-01-2020, 08:52 AM

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RE: Pari : Journey of the queen slut wife - by Maathan - 05-01-2020, 07:03 AM

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RE: Pari : Journey of the queen slut wife - by seansean007 - 05-01-2020, 09:21 PM

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RE: Pari : Journey of the queen slut wife - by Maathan - 09-01-2020, 08:01 AM

RE: Pari : Journey of the queen slut wife - by Maathan - 10-01-2020, 09:39 PM

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RE: Pari : Journey of the queen slut wife - by seansean007 - 22-04-2020, 08:44 PM

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