Adultery Pari : Journey of the queen slut wife
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Good,but try to build up the narrative.It seems you are in a hurry.Anyway writing a story takes time so even trying it is a big deal.It was just a suggestion to improve.Keep it up.
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RE: Pari : Journey of the queen slut wife - by seansean007 - 22-04-2020, 08:44 PM



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