20-04-2020, 12:44 AM
(19-04-2020, 12:58 AM)Bindass08 Wrote: Dear all,
I need honest feedback about this story, aapko ye pasand aa rahi hai k nahi, isme kya improve kar sakte, actually I am first time writer so I will need your inputs to improve my writing skills.
Bcoz mujhe utne reply nahi milte jisse mujhe feel hota hai sayad ye story logo k pasand nahi aa rahi..
Story bahut accha ja raha he.. aage likhte rahiyega.