19-04-2020, 08:38 AM
(19-04-2020, 12:58 AM)Bindass08 Wrote: Dear all,Update jaldi jaldi do story ekdum top class hai par thoda aage badhao
I need honest feedback about this story, aapko ye pasand aa rahi hai k nahi, isme kya improve kar sakte, actually I am first time writer so I will need your inputs to improve my writing skills.
Bcoz mujhe utne reply nahi milte jisse mujhe feel hota hai sayad ye story logo k pasand nahi aa rahi..