19-04-2020, 12:58 AM
(This post was last modified: 19-04-2020, 08:12 AM by Bindass08. Edited 1 time in total. Edited 1 time in total.)
Dear all,
I need honest feedback about this story, aapko ye pasand aa rahi hai k nahi, isme kya improve kar sakte, actually I am first time writer so I will need your inputs to improve my writing skills.
Bcoz mujhe utne reply nahi milte jisse mujhe feel hota hai sayad ye story logo k pasand nahi aa rahi..
I need honest feedback about this story, aapko ye pasand aa rahi hai k nahi, isme kya improve kar sakte, actually I am first time writer so I will need your inputs to improve my writing skills.
Bcoz mujhe utne reply nahi milte jisse mujhe feel hota hai sayad ye story logo k pasand nahi aa rahi..