Misc. Erotica Sexual exploitation of Harika and Her Sandhya Babhi in Bihar

[longindian_axe]

Dude, nice to see ya update after a long.. Nice.. But frankly speaking, it has gone slightly over the top.. it has become more of an incest saga rather than a humiliation story... The women need to be humiliated in the hands of goons and others, not family members.. Pls focus more on the shame part, the women should feel the humiliation and shame of being naked..
I know writing a story is a tough task and you are doing it, kudos to you as I can't do it.. But these are just some of my suggestions.. Can give few ideas as well if u like..