15-04-2020, 03:45 PM
Bhai, main aapki majaboori samajh sakta hoon lekin slow and short updates will ruin your erotica. Other writer suggested you to write 1 hour daily so you will make huge content. You are losing your fans. Look at Sunnyboi completed his story with regular updates. And please focus on Protagonist only. No mother please. You will ruin the protagonist importance. You have supporting characters Birju watchman and society manager.
One suggestion:Outdoor Erotic Adventure is very risky. Now you have already done it. You have got a blackmail plot to exploit in future by watchman or society manager. But Salva should be first. You are one of the best erotic writer but late updates will ruin your story. e.g. Rajkumar's Budha Tailor. And we encourage you with positive feedback.
One suggestion:Outdoor Erotic Adventure is very risky. Now you have already done it. You have got a blackmail plot to exploit in future by watchman or society manager. But Salva should be first. You are one of the best erotic writer but late updates will ruin your story. e.g. Rajkumar's Budha Tailor. And we encourage you with positive feedback.