Those 6 days at Goa

[luvpain]

Good writing. I beleive this is not a regular story, where in the narration either would be done by wife or husband. In this case it's son who is seeking his mother falling in the trap of Pratap. It's very difficult to express the kids emotional and I feel rather complicated. The author should give equal importance to the feeling of son and enjoyment of mother. It would be good to know what mother is going through as we do not have any idea about her feelings. All we know is she has been loved too deep by Pratap now.