Those 6 days at Goa

[Man4u90036]

Thanks for the comment. Should the protagonist, inform his dad?  He is a character. He can do that.

Thanks for the reply dude.. 

I just meant, when the e boy could understand the difference evsn in the type of touch between his mom and pratap... Why to just keep him as a watcher... Give that character significant part..

You mentioned in the starting its a real event... So you should write whatever is happened... Nothing we can change if it happened really.. 

Waiting for the next updates... May be we can discuss it after that.. As this is just beginning