Romance Dr. Revati

[playboy131]

bro, very good update. Loved your story. Just a suggestion, exploit erotic scene fully with more hot narration. Built up develop karo. You have missed the opportunity between Cellena and Watchman. Please develop Bad watchman character for more variety and contrast. Revathi was lucky that Meena saved her. Or the Watchman could hve exploited and bllackmailed Revathi. He could have make her uncontrolled lust while she was recording and touching her private parts. And Revathi is very vulnerable. I hope you understand the scope of your watchman's character in future.

Thnx for your suggestion but the thing is character of all the people is not like some random lust binding freaks which we use to read to in many stories. They are just like a normal person who gets lusty when they face any perticular situation they are not some 24×7 nimphomaniacs. So don't expect any nimpho kind of character in this story coz for me story is more important than lusty nipho's action. And as far as revati concern well she is major lead character in the story who just enter her teenage. So by encountering her with watchman is definitely not a great incident that's why I didn't bother to add this. However i really appreciate your suggestion but let just enjoy the unpredictable way of the story instead of making it another nimphomaniac character story.