17-02-2019, 07:39 AM
(14-02-2019, 12:18 PM)Sudha StoryTeller Wrote: Logan555
Waah bahut Khub Abhi Tak Ki Kahani Bahut badiya Lagi
Appke Likhane Ki Style Bahut Pasand Aayi Bahut Badiya Likhte Hai Aap
So Far So Erotic So Narrative and i like narration rather than main plot of story
Anyways Thanks For Sharing and definitely i will going to learn so many things from your story
Regards
Sudha
Thanks a lot madam for liking my story so far and very very thanks for us appreciation towards my writing skills.
Waise yahi story maine pehle xosssip par likhi thi aur waha story day 5 ke last update tak likhi ja chuki thi par xossip band ho jane ki wajah se wo story waha adhuri reh gai.
Waha story ko proper dialoge ke sath likha tha har sex scene ko kafi detailing ke sath par story band ho jane ki wajah se purani likhi ja chuki story tak jald se jald pahuchne ke liye kafi short karke likh raha. Par aapko ye style bhi pasand aa raha iske liye shukriya.
Aur meri story se apko kuch seekhne ko mila ye to mere liye bahut badi baat hai aise hi is story se jude rahe aur apne feedback dete rahe.