08-04-2020, 03:22 PM
(This post was last modified: 08-04-2020, 03:25 PM by Wtf99. Edited 1 time in total. Edited 1 time in total.)
I hope you come back and start updating the story but my request would be to keep the setting of the hospital. A high class vulnerable woman trapped in a dirty hospital with so many tharki ugly low class men while the entire city is in a lockdown is one of the best kinds of settings to read of. In my opinion don't take the home servant route suggested by some because that'll make this story totally identical to the thousands of stories written by other writers and just so you know there's another hit story currently being updated regularly that has the exact same setting if you take that route. So don't. Your original setting and location is hot as fuck which is the hospital. Write the story based in this location. Your first update was really good and I think the subsequent newer updates will be even better. All the best brother with the new updates.