Son helps neighbor to get mom

[rv3443]

i am not seeing many replies for my story when compared to other stories on this site. maybe my narration is not good. there is no point in continuing the story if there is no feedback from the readers. i will only update the story if i get some comments and replies from u people...thank u

Nice build up to the story. You are doing good sir. The more you write the more comments will come. The only issue is that the updates are small. So, try to write big updates.