06-04-2020, 07:07 AM
(05-04-2020, 09:53 PM)Lion King 989 Wrote: Sab se pahle jitne mere frds ne dil khol kar cmmt kare sab ka dil se Dhanyawad mai maafi chahonga ki har kisi ko mai unke cmmt ka reply nahi de pa raha ho iska karan ye hai ki foam ki speed kam hai agar kisi ko unka reply deta ho to 2 min tak load hi hota rahta hai.... Isliye mai sab ka cmmt ka reply nahi de pa raha ho.....
Par mai ye story alag se likhonga max story mai galiyo se shuru ho jati hai par yaha mai thoda real touch donga jaise immotion ke sath love bhi jod sako aur ek aurat ki jo kafi andar hi andar tadapti hai uska mai kuch dil ki Baat uske hisab se Lao na ki galiya tourcher se yaha woh maza bhi le aur apni Sharam bhi rakhe.... Aur kuch aur charecter hai man mai jab zaroorat hogi woh likhonga..... Par abhi sab yahi socho ki 22 din tak woh akeli rahegi to in 22 din mai uske sath ek ghar mai kiya kiya possible hai woh batata ho is story ke mayam se......
Aur ap aisa hi prem dena to mai is story ko nazbeen bahak gayi ke aas pass le jaonga hi
Ekdom sahi bat bhai