05-04-2020, 08:57 PM
I like your stories -- I hope you don't take this wrong - but I wish you keep Kavitha with Raja sir and not introduce other characters. The story between Raja Sir, Kavi and Mani itself is so hot - Other characters are really a distraction. It takes away the stories flow. Also do not make that Kavi sleeps with anyone. It really brings down the story -- however with those three characters the story is hot because of the tension.