30-03-2020, 02:27 PM
(30-03-2020, 02:05 PM)Ajay.star Wrote: Xossip pe jaha tak aapne likha he vo sab padha he. Mene socha sayad aap kuch naya add karo to padhne me aur maja aaye.
maine bich bich men kaafi kuch add kiya hai agar aap continously ise padh rahe honge to shaayd aapko andaaz laga hoga haan main story line , story ka treatment aur characterization change nahi kar sakti
meri nayi story MOHE RANG DE hai na , nayepan ke liye pahdiye na use