29-03-2020, 12:42 AM
(29-03-2020, 12:02 AM)Royalkingfire Wrote: Baddeader e din bad updated diya issliye time laga
Dosto apke pass kuch suggestions ho ya kuch
Idea ho toh jarur batana me jarur mind me lunga
Update kesa laga comments karke batana
Thanks for the update.... Please don't turn this young girl into a slut by making her fall for an old/ dirty servant at this stage, instead you may open her gradually with the erotic seduction by the servant like you had shown her in that cleaning episode. Also please mind the spacing between the lines. Its a nice plot but please take it slow with lots of seduction scenes.
Thanks